"and he dreamed of tomorrow" perfect ending. My heart ached for both these characters; each of them yearned for love and thought they found it, but because of the society they lived in were unable to keep it, until they found each other.
You did a wonderful job creating this universe and your characters felt like a true product of this society. Does that make sense? Even though this society didn't seem to encourage love (it felt cold and clinical to me), both characters had managed to experience it previously in their lives, so they recognized it with each other. When Sian realized (or hoped he knew) what Kellan's whole problem was, and released him from slavery, well I came undone.
Sorry, my big girl words have escaped me tonight. In a nutshell, this story made me melty and weepy and the raspberry soap made my heart clench and OH!!! FINN OMG. Beautiful
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Date: 2009-06-01 06:30 am (UTC)You did a wonderful job creating this universe and your characters felt like a true product of this society. Does that make sense? Even though this society didn't seem to encourage love (it felt cold and clinical to me), both characters had managed to experience it previously in their lives, so they recognized it with each other. When Sian realized (or hoped he knew) what Kellan's whole problem was, and released him from slavery, well I came undone.
Sorry, my big girl words have escaped me tonight. In a nutshell, this story made me melty and weepy and the raspberry soap made my heart clench and OH!!! FINN OMG. Beautiful