Now you forget that nervousness and start being very proud, hon.
A lovely first chapter, and I can't wait for more. I usually hate saying that and I don't want to pressure you, but just know that this is very, how to say, hooking? story as I want to read more of these two. Very realistically written, like watching that scene happen right in front of me. And gosh my heart just ached for Bill for thinking Tom is taken - it's his daughter, right?
They seem so good together, I know this'll be so very good.
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