I really, really enjoyed this! You've hooked me in with your writing style and descriptions already. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this - very soon I hope!
There's just something about your characterization of both boys (ha ha, men) that made me smile a lot while reading this chapter.
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Date: 2009-06-04 03:19 am (UTC)There's just something about your characterization of both boys (ha ha, men) that made me smile a lot while reading this chapter.