Don't need to be nervous, darling. This first chapter is really, really good. I love AUs, I guess they are my fav genre, and this story starts out in a way that I'm sure I'm gonna like the upcoming chapters too. That it's well-written is no surprise for me, you wrote it after all :) and what I particularly like about it was that it played out as a scene from a movie. I had no difficulty visualising what was going on, while you didn't overburden us with description details and other stuff normally I just skip in fics. I know it's not a nice thing to do, but I'm an impatient reader. So, all in all, I hope you'll update soon. I'll be here to read it!
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Date: 2009-06-04 04:41 am (UTC)