Commenting just in case Windows decides to restart and lose my tabs AGAIN. *shifty eyes* After reading the first part of this story I hopped over to your journal and opened up, like, all of your Tom/Bill stories in tabs and...that ended badly. So if I never get around to commenting on your previous fic please know it's not because I didn't want to!
I was very glad to see a new part of this story last night! It's great to see more of Bill and what brought him to the small town, and what lovely interactions with Tom. That hesitant, awkward phase of wanting to get to know someone yet not knowing quite how best to relate or open up to them is really coming across clearly in this part.
Great place to end it, dropping the fact of the daughter on Bill. We didn't even get to see his reaction! I very much look forward to the next part!
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Date: 2009-06-12 01:58 pm (UTC)I was very glad to see a new part of this story last night! It's great to see more of Bill and what brought him to the small town, and what lovely interactions with Tom. That hesitant, awkward phase of wanting to get to know someone yet not knowing quite how best to relate or open up to them is really coming across clearly in this part.
Great place to end it, dropping the fact of the daughter on Bill. We didn't even get to see his reaction! I very much look forward to the next part!