Wonderful. So nice and slow but very realistic at the same time. I love the realism in this and honestly the slowness. It doesn't have the rushed feeling that I find in my own writing, just an overall steady pace.
I can truly imagine picking a book off a Barnes and Nobles shelf and having this chapter come out of it. Good gracious, you're a good writer.
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Date: 2009-08-16 02:34 am (UTC)I can truly imagine picking a book off a Barnes and Nobles shelf and having this chapter come out of it. Good gracious, you're a good writer.