ext_313141 ([identity profile] hollie136.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] steins_stories 2009-07-03 06:52 am (UTC)

Yes! *arm pump* I was really hoping Bill would be the more assertive partner, and you didn't fail me (when do you ever).

I just love the whole going slow thing, with shy Tom. Your exploration of these characters is just wonderful. I'm finding this story a refreshing change from the 'jump in the sack stories' we all tend to write. Not that those aren't good, but it's nice to find a story that's more about the story and not just about the sex.

I'm sure I'll have more to say about this lovely chapter, after I reread it a few times.

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