Tom is an awesome father. Like Bill, I am jealous of Janni for having that.
I think that he explained things beautifully. And, yep, Tom, for Janni it can be that easy! It will be a bit harder to explain other peoples' prejudice, and Janni and Tom dealing with the fall-out of that, I fear.
Still doing a beautiful job of portraying the slow-building desire and trust and friendship between Tom and Bill. *happy sigh* I love how much they obviously wanted to kiss each other, and touch each other, but they did after all muster the self-control to set it aside for later. (But I must confess I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when they have time and leisure to really BE together.)
David added a bit of sass and humor to round out this chapter. Very good! I didn't want it to end!
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Date: 2009-07-23 04:40 am (UTC)I think that he explained things beautifully. And, yep, Tom, for Janni it can be that easy! It will be a bit harder to explain other peoples' prejudice, and Janni and Tom dealing with the fall-out of that, I fear.
Still doing a beautiful job of portraying the slow-building desire and trust and friendship between Tom and Bill. *happy sigh* I love how much they obviously wanted to kiss each other, and touch each other, but they did after all muster the self-control to set it aside for later. (But I must confess I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when they have time and leisure to really BE together.)
David added a bit of sass and humor to round out this chapter. Very good! I didn't want it to end!