b) Bill had dressed up for him, in black jeans and a thin, white, button-down shirt, the top two buttons open, the fabric parted. His makeup was light, only kohl lining his eyes and a hint of gloss, and his hair was ironed straight and Tom couldn’t figure out why every time he saw him, Bill seemed more beautiful than the time before.
That description of Bill killed me :-) In a good way.
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b) Bill had dressed up for him, in black jeans and a thin, white, button-down shirt, the top two buttons open, the fabric parted. His makeup was light, only kohl lining his eyes and a hint of gloss, and his hair was ironed straight and Tom couldn’t figure out why every time he saw him, Bill seemed more beautiful than the time before.
That description of Bill killed me :-) In a good way.