ext_340894 ([identity profile] cristy22.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] steins_stories 2009-08-02 09:43 pm (UTC)

I got very excited over the movie. I love Cary Grant in just about everything he made.

Everything about this chapter was great. I love how they both can't keep their eyes (or hands for that matter) off each other.

Tom’s nervous laugh revealed his embarrassment. “You distract me. I’m afraid if you stand here and watch me, I’ll fuck something up.”
I love this line. There is just something about the way he expresses himself to Bill that I love. There is such a innocent honesty from him and I think it really works for the story. You can feel how nervous Tom is at time, but it's so endearing. I can see why Bill is falling for him.

I love that they started something intimate here too. It should help settle some of Tom's fears. I hope Bill says yes. I really love this story and can't wait for more!

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