ext_340894 ([identity profile] cristy22.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] steins_stories 2009-08-30 09:38 am (UTC)

Another awesome chapter. I loved the opening scene where Tom is just accessing how he feels about Bill and realizing it is love. It was so sweet to see him waking for the first time with Bill and just not able to not kiss him. I did cringe when Janni came barging in, but I thought that Tom not only handled hims mother nicely, but that he didn't back down. Bill standing behind him, just with the simple gesture of a hand on his shoulder was so great and made me love Bill more.

I love that Tom is so proud of Bill, but I have a feeling that he is going to have trouble at work now. It's so sad too because they were so cute acting all couple like in the store. I love that he actually called Bill his partner.

Janni cracked me up in this one. She's so innocent, but kids just say whatever is in their heads. I could just picture my niece saying something like that and she is always so loud when she does that stuff. I do love how comfortable she is with Bill though and that he is comfortable with her too.

I'm afraid of them having trouble now seeing two different people changed their attitudes when they saw Bill and Tom together. I love this story, but I just want to whisk them away to a more understanding city :(

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