Well, well, well. I've been off-line all day, I finally drag my ass away from SPN and looky what I find!!
You have got Tom pegged here. I was going to say I loved how he was all insecure, but that's not really it. He's more just questioning himself. Whatever, I guess he was insecure. You've captured it wonderfully. His little 'test' was fabulous!
As usual, everything was so visual, from the clouds and clouds of cigarette smoke to the soaking wet and dripping Tom, perfect. Oh, and THIS just cracked me up He didn't even want to think about how his dick twitched slightly now when he smelled medicated ointment.
Of course, his confrontation with Georg turned out SO hot and you've left this wide open to explore things further. I like that. And, also as usual, I could probably fangirl over your stories all night, so I'll shut up now.
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You have got Tom pegged here. I was going to say I loved how he was all insecure, but that's not really it. He's more just questioning himself. Whatever, I guess he was insecure. You've captured it wonderfully. His little 'test' was fabulous!
As usual, everything was so visual, from the clouds and clouds of cigarette smoke to the soaking wet and dripping Tom, perfect. Oh, and THIS just cracked me up He didn't even want to think about how his dick twitched slightly now when he smelled medicated ointment.
Of course, his confrontation with Georg turned out SO hot and you've left this wide open to explore things further. I like that. And, also as usual, I could probably fangirl over your stories all night, so I'll shut up now.