http://chayenne7.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] chayenne7.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] steins_stories 2009-09-21 04:17 pm (UTC)

god, I enjoyed it!
even though I don't really like dominant Bill in bed, this worked just fine and was HOTHOTHOT *melted in a puddle* I liked how immediately after it was over Bill became all shy about his previous wild behavior. YES! And then things went back to how they should when Lucas got on top for the second round.
It's funny with these imaginary names too. Since nobody knows the guy's real name everyone comes up with a new one. XD
And the fanny pack...shit, that's what you get if you are a grown man and carry a fanny pack, boy! Hilarious.
All in all: amazing job!

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