You know, if you ever need a challenge (hahaha)this would be an interesting story to rewrite from a really pissed off David's point of view. You have to admit, that was another way this story could have swung. You are so good with emotions, but i don't think I've every read a story of yours where a character is really ranting and raving mad. Of course, you'd have to keep the angst in there and have David collapse into a sobbing mess when Timo calls and David realizes his best friend and his music are returning.

So yeah ... um, I was just sort of thinking this after I read the story AGAIN. Tuck that bunny away.