Okay, I kicked my company out (they're the type that don't quite get the hint that it's time to go) and came back and reread this.
I'm still loving it! And you say this just flowed out? Lucky you! And wonderful Steven for letting you write. Oh, and I love the banner, it's perfect.
So yeah, I just had to let you know, once again, that this story lit me up!! I especially liked how you've got Bill begging to watch the movie. I don't know how many times I had that discussion with Nigel. But the little brat never had a nightmare, so my arguing always fell on deaf ears. But you captured the moment perfectly.
And I bet Tomi was really begging Eric's mom to please, please take him home, too. You just know he's useless without his Bill.
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Date: 2009-11-09 06:38 am (UTC)I'm still loving it! And you say this just flowed out? Lucky you! And wonderful Steven for letting you write. Oh, and I love the banner, it's perfect.
So yeah, I just had to let you know, once again, that this story lit me up!! I especially liked how you've got Bill begging to watch the movie. I don't know how many times I had that discussion with Nigel. But the little brat never had a nightmare, so my arguing always fell on deaf ears. But you captured the moment perfectly.
And I bet Tomi was really begging Eric's mom to please, please take him home, too. You just know he's useless without his Bill.