ext_206678 ([identity profile] subtlemagic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] steins_stories 2009-11-24 06:32 pm (UTC)

You've switched between Rachel and Tasha in the line "Tasha cocked her head" to "Rachel looked at David" Just so you know.

I don't believe I've read this before. I always miss the good ones.
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