There is so much real emotion in this chapter that I can only imagine how hard it was to write. Your feelings translated really well through the story and it was honestly hard to read because I kept choking up & it made me anxious. I'm not surprised either that Tom doesn't notice, but it makes me nervous that he is so oblivious.
Of course i'm still reading it! This is one of my all-time favorite stories <333
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Date: 2010-01-30 04:31 am (UTC)Of course i'm still reading it! This is one of my all-time favorite stories <333