Wow. You are such a talanted writer. You wrote that so very very beautifully. My heart ached. It still does. Shit. I feel so very sorry for Tom... And for Bill. And Janni! She has grown so very fond off Bill. She must have felt the tension when Tom didn't. My, my... And what a bloody cliffhanger!
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Date: 2010-02-24 09:49 pm (UTC)