I really didn't expect Bill to come back without Tom chasing after him, and that was a sweet surprise though it did make me start crying right away :) You have a real talent for doing that with this story! Janni's description of her picture at the end just tugged at my heart. They ARE a family and I'm glad that Bill can see it is something he needs to fight for
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Date: 2010-04-18 02:35 am (UTC)