ext_168372 ([identity profile] steinsgrrl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] steins_stories 2010-04-18 03:06 am (UTC)

Mhm, in the first draft of the outline, Bill ran off to New York and Tom had to go get him but when I tried to write it, it wouldn't come. It honestly just couldn't happen, so then Bill couldn't leave. And really, I like it much more this way, without Janni ever knowing that Bill could ever even think of walking out, because in the first draft, she was torn up by it. I couldn't do it. ;_;

I'm so glad this touched your heart! Thank you for telling me. ♥

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