steins_stories

Mhm, in the first draft of the outline, Bill ran off to New York and Tom had to go get him but when I tried to write it, it wouldn't come. It honestly just couldn't happen, so then Bill couldn't leave. And really, I like it much more this way, without Janni ever knowing that Bill could ever even think of walking out, because in the first draft, she was torn up by it. I couldn't do it. ;_;

I'm so glad this touched your heart! Thank you for telling me. ♥