ext_15176 ([identity profile] dusty273.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] steins_stories 2010-04-18 03:14 am (UTC)

I read this over at THF about a month ago, and I'm not sure if I ever got around to reviewing, but I wanted to say I'm in awe at your talent. It's been a long time since I've been so involved on a story or cried as much as I did with the past chapter.

This chapter was just perfect. I love that Bill stayed and decided to fight for his family, instead of running away. Tom's reaction was completely realistic to it, too. He had no idea what Bill was planning of doing and of course he needed the reassurance afterwards that Bill would be staying with him and Janni. I absolutely adored that Janni made them that drawing of them as a family. She's too adorable!

I'll be looking forward to more.


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