ext_313164 ([identity profile] remy-jen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] steins_stories 2010-05-28 02:16 am (UTC)

Omg, I loved this waaaayyyyy too much. I love the Bill/Natalie dynamic you've caught here--with the attraction maybe one-sided or maybe just pushed to the back of their minds because they're both too professional to go there or maybe just because to Bill she's really just his BFF. Either way, I loved her fantasy, and the whole scene felt so vivid. I never thought I'd get so hot over a Natalie masturbation scene, but damn girl, *fans self*, that was hottttt!!! And not only that, but it was really unique, and that made it fun to read. One of my favorite MMOM fics, by far!

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