Hmmm, I love me some het, and Bill/Natalie is such a guilty pleasure :) This was really hot, and the bittersweetness of it being just a fantasy didn't take away from that at all, in fact, I thought it only enhanced the sense of need that Natalie feels.
I really liked the way this dream of 'her' Bill belonged to her life on the road, to her rare moments of privacy. At home she has her husband and kid, but the life she leads is kind of a parallel universe to that and with it comes a totally different set of desires that is linked to the dream you talk about, Bill's dream that they all share. I really enjoyed that, it gave the whole thing such a feel of a fairytale fantasy.
If I may suggest one thing - I'm not sure about the title, is it meant to be 'A dream alone'? It's not quite clear, but I'd be happy to help out with the German if I can :) Hope it's okay to mention this, it's only a minor thing, but I was just wondering.
Very nicely done, and very sensual! I enjoyed it greatly, thank you!
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Date: 2010-05-28 12:19 pm (UTC)I really liked the way this dream of 'her' Bill belonged to her life on the road, to her rare moments of privacy. At home she has her husband and kid, but the life she leads is kind of a parallel universe to that and with it comes a totally different set of desires that is linked to the dream you talk about, Bill's dream that they all share. I really enjoyed that, it gave the whole thing such a feel of a fairytale fantasy.
If I may suggest one thing - I'm not sure about the title, is it meant to be 'A dream alone'? It's not quite clear, but I'd be happy to help out with the German if I can :) Hope it's okay to mention this, it's only a minor thing, but I was just wondering.
Very nicely done, and very sensual! I enjoyed it greatly, thank you!