*wistful sigh* As much as I've been obsessing about reading all the Torg I can find lately, this was just beautifully sweet. The sex, excuse me, love scene (because that's what it was. no doubt)was just beautiful. A visage of vocabulary and wonderful imagery.
I also LOVED how you changed the POV from Georg's at the beginning to Bill's at the end. It's such a creative thing to do to make this really like.. a statement, a lovers' statement, y'know? &hearts
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Date: 2009-04-06 11:47 pm (UTC)I also LOVED how you changed the POV from Georg's at the beginning to Bill's at the end. It's such a creative thing to do to make this really like.. a statement, a lovers' statement, y'know? &hearts